I was like, meh, this is gonna be that stupid cliche again, but then it happened to be a love story with a touching ending that certainly touched my heart, literally.
I was like, meh, this is gonna be that stupid cliche again, but then it happened to be a love story with a touching ending that certainly touched my heart, literally.
Good to know that my video has reached into the depths of your body to caress your heart!
Well, to be your first animation it doesn't look TOO bad, there are worse things out there, but still, you have to improve a lot xD At least it made me laugh a little, BUT and i mean a BIG BUT, you shouldn't try to draw like egoraptor or taking his "awesome" concept either, seriously, take your own drawing style and ideas, there are already a lot of Egoraptor rip-offs out there, and we don't like rip-offs right?
Oh and i just realized, how come the weight of the file is so high? damn
I want to find my own style.. This Animation has been made in 3 hours :D
In the Future I will have more time
Well, you don't really need much to know why people will give you a low score, you just need to improve, the quality of the voices were bad, not very sure if it's because of the microphone you used or because you didn't set the quality of the audio to high before publishing, or maybe both... The drawing style needs to improve, the animation needs to improve and well, i didn't understand the jokes xD With the time you will improve, i recommend you guys to watch tutorials, read books etc... Just work work work work etc
I acually didn't know thank you kind darker, the jokes were mainly stereotypes from popular animes such as the bad guy throwing a huge ass tournament just so he/she can battle the maincharacter
That wasn't animation, just some Gifs
well, several different animations......
and they are sort of done in pastels is something i would like to add
It made me LOL at least
Thanks :I
Ok te voy a dar varios consejos que probablemete te vengan bien, primero, en Newgrounds la de la gente no entienede español, asique puedes poner subtitulos o hacer las voces en inglés si quieres, segundo, los memes como trolls y esas cosas no son graciosos ya, algún que otro te puede criticar fuerte por usarlos, aunque la palabra troll para referirte a alguien molesto supongo que no importa usarla, tercero, los chistes eran un poco predecibles, intenta hacer chistes más originales y por último, haz un botón al principio para darle a play y también uno al final para repetir la animación. Aún la animación, los movimientos y tal no estaban mal, se mejorar pero con el tiempo los harás mejor.
Si planeo hacerlo pero en futuros capitulos en este no me dio tiempo y lo quise subir rapido gracias C:
Cascadia pls
You'll be able to make something with the time, for now this looks bad dude, but i kind of see potential here, i don't really know why but i see potential. I guess it's because you know how to draw apart from animating, and even if this isn't even well drawn you can actually see that this was done by someone who knows how to draw, and.... I DON'T KNOW I JUST SEE IT! If you are going to animate more i'd like to see your progress. DON DISPOIN ME I WAN FREE ENTRTAIMEN OK!!1?
LOL! XD Thank you for the critique! Really, I do appreciate it. It helps motivate me to do better. :)
This is the first time I ever put sound and a button in flash... So... yeah, AS3 is butt... lol
Free entertainment!!!!!!!!! Woot!
The story was the better part of this, very touching, but the animation was so horrible dude, use less symbols you lazy fuck
i didn't use symbols, i framed by framed it
no need to get aggressive
How can this be in featured while is under judgement? You evil Sausge are using black magic again?
WOW THAT WAS QUICK LOL
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