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Well, to be your first animation it doesn't look TOO bad, there are worse things out there, but still, you have to improve a lot xD At least it made me laugh a little, BUT and i mean a BIG BUT, you shouldn't try to draw like egoraptor or taking his "awesome" concept either, seriously, take your own drawing style and ideas, there are already a lot of Egoraptor rip-offs out there, and we don't like rip-offs right?
Oh and i just realized, how come the weight of the file is so high? damn

Ketchup442 responds:

I want to find my own style.. This Animation has been made in 3 hours :D
In the Future I will have more time

Lol how come if in the title and description says : POINTLESS ANIMATION DO NOT WATCH, i will watch it anyway? the drawings are not bad, but you already expected low score right?

Well, you don't really need much to know why people will give you a low score, you just need to improve, the quality of the voices were bad, not very sure if it's because of the microphone you used or because you didn't set the quality of the audio to high before publishing, or maybe both... The drawing style needs to improve, the animation needs to improve and well, i didn't understand the jokes xD With the time you will improve, i recommend you guys to watch tutorials, read books etc... Just work work work work etc

thebreadandbutter responds:

I acually didn't know thank you kind darker, the jokes were mainly stereotypes from popular animes such as the bad guy throwing a huge ass tournament just so he/she can battle the maincharacter

That wasn't animation, just some Gifs

Belthagor responds:

well, several different animations......

and they are sort of done in pastels is something i would like to add

It made me LOL at least

TheSoupGuy responds:

Thanks :I

This doesn't deserve to be on my beloved Newgrounds

Lol pretty funny xD

Wow this was really cool, the audio sounds great, the voices, sounds and music were almost perfect, the story and jokes here were pretty good too, but the only thing that failed was the animation, it wasn't too bad tho but you could improve it, you use smearing too much, and you could try to have the lines cleaner. Anyways this was pretty cool, it would get 5 stars if it had better animation

Ok te voy a dar varios consejos que probablemete te vengan bien, primero, en Newgrounds la de la gente no entienede español, asique puedes poner subtitulos o hacer las voces en inglés si quieres, segundo, los memes como trolls y esas cosas no son graciosos ya, algún que otro te puede criticar fuerte por usarlos, aunque la palabra troll para referirte a alguien molesto supongo que no importa usarla, tercero, los chistes eran un poco predecibles, intenta hacer chistes más originales y por último, haz un botón al principio para darle a play y también uno al final para repetir la animación. Aún la animación, los movimientos y tal no estaban mal, se mejorar pero con el tiempo los harás mejor.

Thevelocimotion responds:

Si planeo hacerlo pero en futuros capitulos en este no me dio tiempo y lo quise subir rapido gracias C:

Lol this was very funny and well animated, maybe some little improvements in the animation, but anyways it was great, good job man.

hey :)

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